Today, we have looked at the narration of scene one and where the narrator would be placed onstage. We then looked at the way Lewis would be acting on board, as we are showing the last day he was recorded alive.
Firstly, please change the background - I'm old and can't read the writing properly against a background of a VW camper and a boat! This is far too brief Jade - you are simply narrating what you have done without any personal commentary, reflection or opionion of the work and you are not making it evident what you yourself are contributing. The pictures are great and useful for recalling work, but will not count in your SWED so it is the words you need to make sure are relevant and helpign me to understand your thinking. You have also not made any reference to research material. Keep referring back to the questions set at the start to make sure you blog is relevant.
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, please change the background - I'm old and can't read the writing properly against a background of a VW camper and a boat!
ReplyDeleteThis is far too brief Jade - you are simply narrating what you have done without any personal commentary, reflection or opionion of the work and you are not making it evident what you yourself are contributing. The pictures are great and useful for recalling work, but will not count in your SWED so it is the words you need to make sure are relevant and helpign me to understand your thinking. You have also not made any reference to research material. Keep referring back to the questions set at the start to make sure you blog is relevant.